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Hetalia: Reader X ? Plummet

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You looked up as a large snowflake landed on your nose. Snow. You hated snow. 'I've gotta get moving before this becomes a blizzard.' You thought.  You got up off the ground and started walking. To where? You didn't know; and didn't care. You found yourself in a park. 'This brings back memories.' You thought again. You looked up to the sky and took a little trip down memory lane…

~*15 yrs old*~
"_____!"
"Mom! Dad! Where are you?!"
"_____! You have to get out of here! They'll kill you if you don't!"
"Mom, I'm not leaving you!" you screamed, running up the stairs in your domicile.
"____ You have to leave!!"
Gunshots echoed, and you froze on the spot.
"Mom? Dad?" your voice was just barley a whisper. You ran up the rest of the stairs to the room they were in. everything had changed. And you parents? They had died.
The tears started.
~*end of flash back*~



You blinked back into reality. "well so much for trying to stay out of the blizzard." You said and started walking again.
Unfortunately for you, you couldn't see more than two inches past your nose, so when you ran into a tree, you weren't really surprised. But you were when the ground beneath you fell away and you fell into the dark depths.
However, someone saw everything that happened…
hey everybody! first deviation, first reader insert. i think i know how my sister feels now. okay, a few things:

1. If you want, I'll continue.
2. i want you to tell me which character(s) (Russia, Nordics, etc, basically any of the snow-related character(s)) you want to be... yeah. that.
3. I need you, all of you, to tell me where i need to improve.

so, COMMENT! PLEASE! I'll read the comments, i may or may not reply. i probably will reply though.

right. Hetalia is this guy's ---> :iconhimaruyaplz:.
not mine.
You © you

EDIT: hey look what's this?

ノ- |||||
Россия- |||

GAAAHHHHH! MORE OF YOU NED TO COMMENT! I SHOULD DROWN IN THE COMMENTS!

EDIT 2: it's either Russia or Norway. CHOOSE DARN YOU! Besides, i'm gonna say the voting ends on Monday, the 27th.
hurry up!!!

EDIT 3: VOTING HAS ENDED! NO MORE!
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FFRules-girl14's avatar
You looked up as a large snowflake landed on your nose. Snow. You hated snow....the first few lines is so me even though I live in ohio!